by LoveFromRoma
Unlike the other complainers here, I don't care if it was consentual or not or whatever. I don't have to like a character to enjoy a story. But I still have to say this wasn't that good. It was just like a thousand other stories I've read about a girl losing her cherry. I didn't see anything new at all, and my penis is still flaccid.
Nothing about the adult male's action was justifiable. Stories of seduction between two real adults is erotic this was closer to a rape.