by SarahCD
Loved it! That would be a fantasy come true! I have been enjoying your stories and hope there is more. Whether true or a fantasy they have so far all been erotic. I would happily switch places with Sarah!
I enjoyed the set up and the action. Very sexy and hot. A first-person voice might make it less distant so you might want to play with that. Just being constructive, but keep writing on this subject. Very vivid imagination and hot.
Hugs and kisses,
Di