All Comments on 'Sarah's Tale Ch. 01'

Amazing love lust story. Would have been nice to know what kind of lingerie Sarah was wearing. Sheer bra, sheer panties? Teddy? Bra, garterbelt, stockings and heels? Maybe a hot follow up. Would love to hear Sarah talking dirty and taking a massive facial.

You should try something else...

Delicious. A great fuck story.

Very nice!

I enjoyed your first story well. The emotional aspect in the story is a nice touch without being over the top.

There could be a developing story line in the series about the open marriage agreement with mom and dad. The daughter obviously knows about it but there needs to be an explanation from the dads perspective and how that underlying tension about the inequity of partner choices briefly felt in this story. You have left yourself a few avenues in this story line, should you choose to continue it.

Thank you to everyone who read and left feedback, I really appreciate it! I will be releasing the next chapter soon.

Great debut, I loved how realistic the whole story is. Not "jumping bones" at first opporrtunity, but careful development of the relationship, as it should be.

Well done