All Comments on 'Sarah's Journey Ch. 009'

Sorry, I really do hate to put down another writer's work, and when I saw that your number of published exceeded the number of your followers I should have just skipped over this one. So boring.

@Odiouser

Thank you for your feed back. I agree this is one of the less exciting chapters. I really wanted to paint an accurate picture here for readers as later chapters will contain events that will seem far fetched and unrealistic. Yes these chapters are really about my life and the things that have actually happened to me.

It was as good a chapter as any . That guy didn't even need to say anything . I guess he knows good writing . Lol . You will find a lot of that on this site . You either have too much erotica . Or not enough . The critics will tell you . I got no complaints .