by Daphne123
I have been reading this from the Beginning . I definitely love this fantasy I hope you continue with Sara sexual Conditioning. πππππππππππ thank you sharing this fantasy.
Thanks Bi47 for the nice words. I was planning on doing one more part to conclude the series, but if the ratings aren't high enough for this chapter I won't bother. I put so much time and effort into these stories and I have two standards I hold myself to:
1) Any story that isn't a 4.5 or higher doesn't get a next chapter
2) Any story that falls below 4.0 gets deleted completely
You could say I take the scores too seriously, but I give everything of myself in these VERY personal stories and I won't put them out there to get slammed. I'm glad YOU enjoy the series. If I need to though, I'll just send you an email with how I planned to end it. :) xoxo Daphne
Daphne, I was soooooo glad to see you've added another chapter to Sara's story! Like they say hotter than August asphalt in Texas! Please continue as long as you have time and inclination.
Keith
The psychological aspect of it has been fun. As she's conditioned more and more, she find herself slowly slipping into her "role" more and more. Now that her entire office is involved, will she ever have a day go by where she's not used against her will? How many months does it take before the "against her will" changes to "by her will"? As the endorphins and Pavlovian training fix this behavior in her mind more and more firmly, will she get to a point where she demands to be used by her coworkers? Now that she's found a safe group to play with, will she relax her subconscious safeguards, thus allowing the training to take even greater hold?
I certainly hope the story continues. Maybe with less sex and more focus on the mental goings-on.
Hi Daphne. I read your comment and gave you 5 stars in the hope that you'll continue. I used to think as you apparently do, with the 4.5 star standard, but I gave up. Some of my favorites of my own stories don't even come close to 4.5 stars. Now I write for myself. One of my recent favorite stories of mine is "Captain Dr. Philip Eames, and Me," which seems to have stabilized at a 4.46 rating. I miss the cute little red flag, but really, it's not a big deal. I encourage you to write a new chapter regardless of the ratings of this one. This one was mostly rapes, and not a lot of story. It would be great to have some serious story in the next chapter; just saying. For example, what went through the minds of the men when they raped poor Sara. Were they conflicted? Why is Sara so evil? Is the in fact evil? Maybe she doesn't see herself that way? When will Dr. Boone be arrested? Lots of questions to be addressed, if you want to... Anyway, it's now at 4.49, so my hopes are high! ~~ JB Edwards
PS: I think Ferrumitzal is thinking along similar lines. If Sara does end up wanting the rapes, would they still be rapes, or just sex? And at that point, would Angie and her co-workers lost interest? There's still the sex, of course, but no longer the attraction of the violation, assuming it is an attraction for her co-workers. Maybe it isn't, and they just wanted to f**k her? So many questions!
For what it's worth, I just put 5 stars on your Captain Philip story. :) I hadn't read it before but it's very good! It pressed MY buttons, that's for sure.
I've got a general idea on how to wrap up the series, and it does get a little more into Sara's mind. I need to figure out the balance between story and sexual encounters though so that it's still really sexy. When I'm reading other stories, I get so bored with 8 page submissions where nothing sexual happens until the end of page 6, even if the writing is good, I just don't have the attention span. I guess that's why mine never go over 2 pages. Some people like more exposition, and that's totally fine for them, but it's not really my style. But, yes, I agree, I need to at least detail the mindset of the characters in the final part. I hope I can deliver something people will like.
<mwah> xoxo - Daphne
Wow that twist was amazing..
Having her raped by 3 men she didn't want and then by Angie, the one she actually finds attractive.
Also loved the sexual conditioning active bit... βΊ
It was awesome, thank you daphne! Aweosme chapter <3
Loved it!! I agree with your comments, I also get bored by stories too heavy on the plot. I don't mind long stories if they're all about sex but if it takes a long to get to it - I can't be bothered haha. Probably why I love your stories so much, you do it just right.
Hope you write more about Sara, I love this series, my favorite of yours.
Hi Daphne,
I would give 5/5, unfortunately i cannot score the story. the 'star rater' doesn't appear.
I hope you can add the score in your mind. I really hope the next chapter will arrive.
hugz n kisses
Absolutely smoking hot. I would definitely give it five stars but, there was no place to do it.
HOT FUCKING DAMN!!! Sara is freaking horny after her conditioning and now Angie has seemed to have to have modified her conditioning to suit her purpose absolutely love this story very creative writing this story is to just damn wicked EXCELLENT JOB!!!