All Comments on 'Sara's Story'

Thanks for your first story post, but you erred in putting it in bdsm. Drugging, kidnapping, assault and rape are not bdsm. Had you put it in noncon, this would be a fine short story. Had there been a consensual agreement, it would have been a fine short bdsm scene.

Please do keep writing. Both categories offer you a place for your fantasies, just watch for that line between.

... which would have been better still, had it been in NC. Please continue to write erotic stories - you have a talent for it. Thank you and welcome to Literotica - I hope we will be seeing much more of your work soon.

Too short! I need more details!

Please please write anther I have never read such a good story

got me all hot and bothered, need some more of this stuff

Good stuff. I came across your piece as I was perusing the comments on the story "Biting Back"