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abandon_thoughtalmost 12 years agoExcellent description - just a shame...
It's a shame, given that you have someone helping you edit, that there are still mistakes in this story as it was, in a word, brilliant.
I almost gave up on it as I came in at Chapter 4 from 'Story Spinner', but the more I read, the more I enjoyed the way you managed to evoke images without necessarily being specific. I loved it all - well done!
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