by vizmaster
***Different type of story telling. Same language different delivery. Will there be other parts of the story? Good read. Thanks for sharing.
Loved it. Glad you brought back neena into the picture. Also the slow build up between sarayu and the protagonist was hot!
Just a sincere request, pls also continue writing more about neena and her son's friend's adventures
Well written - please continue. I like the intersection of the plot with your other stories here.