by vizmaster
Loved it. Can relate with the characters and setting. Would like to read the next installment asap.
"and then disaster struck" beautiful - I was also waiting for that Aunty to leave but alas it was too late. Now waiting for you to describe the 2-3 "most memorable days"
Why didn't Sri didn't thought of inviting this "aunties" to his vacant house ?
Each time I come to this website.The first page I open is this. Eagerly Waiting for the next part...
Very disappointing. Continue the story with a very detailed love making session between Sarayu and Sri. Hope you will do.
Waiting for the next part.
Your narration is wonderful and has the readers hooked. Pls post the later part of the story.