All Comments on 'Sasha Sours Can Cook 01'

OMG here is thought this was to ensure a story about a part time cross dresser, not a flamer.

I did get into it though and almost enjoyed it, the story, that is.

A few words dropped here and there plus the need for better punctuation. One sentence was beyond 65 words and didn't contain OMG.

Your penchant to the dramatic shines throughout this offering.