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muffloverbillmuffloverbillover 6 years ago
Need more

Love your stuff girl. Keep em comin

starhunterstarhunterover 6 years ago
5 stars!

Surprising to see me to be the second reader post comments. I think your story deserves more 5 stars and many more comments. cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Love

Love a women who can take care of herself?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Needs editing

Switching between present tense and past tense is distracting for the reader. Fixing this would greatly improve your story. I'd also like a little more detail. The end was rather abrupt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Needs a sequel

Sorry i keep saying this but none of your stuff feels like one shots except maybe the Christmas nurse one.

I wanna read more of sashas sexy thief aventures

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It's been a crazy few months. Hope you all are safe and doing well. Thank you again for all the support and feedback on what I have posted so far. It means more than you could ever know. - Love, Lady K UPDATE: In the coming months, I will be rewriting some of my older st...