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Anonymousover 11 years agoEh.
Could use a good proofreading. Tense changes took me out of the story 3 sentences in. Couldn't focus on the story when every other sentence changed between 'was' and 'will'. Skimmed it, it doesn't seem to flow well but ideas and plot are sound.
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