All Comments on 'Satan's Seduction'

Great description of "cat and mouse" foreplay with the tables ultimately turned on the cat. Finely written and builds to a stimulating climax.

I enjoyed it and, unlike a lot of these stories, read it to the end. In my opinion the tale was well crafted and nicely written. I was disappointed to find you got so few responses. Perhaps, in this venue, you need to add a lot more 'dripping' description for a more universal reception. My hand found my cock and that is always, for me, a essential element of a good story.

Sexy? Yep. Uninhibited? Definitely. Too much? Well, yes :) A truly good writer? Absolutely...

Cheers

Yoron

i liked the fact that most of the story was the building up and anticipation to the deed. God it's a horney story!