by ThreeLeggedGals
Bobby deserves much better. Really hope his cheating wife gets exposed at some point, and he and his new land lord become a couple instead. Tho, I'm pretty sure the latter is for sure gonna happen. (Being in a relationship and being essentially a private hooker aren't the same thing, for the record.)
3/5. Not enough futa on femboy action. Tho I expect that to change in chapter 3.
Again, great on the sex part and character establishment, but weak on the story and character development. You don't need to write anything complicated, but I would like the characters to be working towards some goal or overcoming some obstacle and to have enough personality for me to root for them to succeed. The characters and their motivations seem really shallow at the moment. Most characters seem to be following their small selfish desires, Bobby and Monica seem like really nice people, but that's about it. Speaking of Monica, Yuki's and Monica's plot line just suddenly appeared. Is it at all connected to the main plot? I feel like that could have been a separate short story about a futa girl and her trainer.
Here's hoping our boy Bobby will be able to overcome his past demons. Even if he loses his piece of crap wife maybe his new girl eyeing will be able to atleast protect his life from Tyra's greedy ass.