All Comments on 'Saturday Morning'

it was a nice little intro, but take a little more time and proofread or let one of the editors on the site help you.

will be looking forward to you next story

This is really a very sweet short story.

Geez.... if it's so important to you that readers be "nice," the least you could have done is some cursory proofreading and corrections. OK story marred by sloppy presentation.

Pee isn't my thing, but I'm interested to hear more about how this arrangement came to be.

Too many grammatical issues for me to read. The site has free editors. Please utilize them.

I now have an editor lined up thank you Terry. I will say this, it is very easy to troll this site and pick on people. you should be warned, most times in life that will come back to you.

Your story "Saturday Morning" is really a very sweet story. Your description of a first time pee play is interesting? You seem to know the mechanics of the act!

For this being the first story you have written, you did very well...

Thank you,

Gay Paige.

Loved it.Was rubbing myself all the way through.