All Comments on 'Saturday Morning'

not too subtle femdom vibe in this one ruined the 'romantic' you were apparently going for.

I love it! You know a couple is comfortable together when they can communicate their desires without fear of being judged by each other. If I changed anything it would be to add something that says "there will be time for me later" or something to that effect.

750 words is a tough constraint on a story, but you did a great job. DLTTWYD