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Click here"No anger dad?" asked Dianna our oldest daughter, Paul's mother, as she hugged me.
"No of course not, we're good. That one was better than last year."
"Good," she grinned. "Because I think we all now have a pretty good guess what took you so long to get out of bed this morning."
I smiled as my daughter led me to the door. "Let's just keep that between ourselves. Your mother may not enjoy knowing that."
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This story was originally a much shorter story, it was part of the 750 Word Project where all stories were required to be exactly 750 words long. One of the 750 authors suggested a project where we take one of our 750-word stories and expand them, and this is my expanded version of 750-1 Saturday Morning.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 1 year agoExcellent story flow and mechanics (grammar, spelling, and punctuation with clear word choices) made this a joy to read. The story had charm about it that made the characters come alive. Well Done!
Duleighabout 1 year agoAuthorMr. Fit
Did you actually READ the story? It appears that you didn't notice that THE BABY MONITOR WAS NOT IN EDDIE AND LARISA'S BEDROOM - that was the joke... get it? the kids freaked out grandma... it was a prank...
As they say, if you have to explain the joke, it's ruined.
DickSnugfitabout 1 year agoThank you for your effort. I found it was mildly erotic, and well-enough written to hold the the reader's interest to the story's conclusion. But perhaps it is because I am older now, I don't know, but I personally found it a little trite, highly derivative, unoriginal, puerile and simplistic, with a cruel edging of spite, and delight in inflicting or observing, enforced humiliation.
Maybe I am in a minority, but that is the one aspect of several stories on this site that I personally cannot stand, no matter how many others are apparently 'enraptured' by it. Sorry, but the vicarious "thrill" of second-hand observations of the infliction of enforced humiliation can never entertain me, any more than the 'delights' of a psycho-child pulling-off the legs of a spider one-at-a-time, and watching its slow, agonizing, draw-out demise.
I will watch or read anything, but I won't do that, -not on any level!
Anonymousabout 1 year agoI feel like I was the brunt of that April Fool's Joke. I read this story in stages.
Hmm... This is sweet.
Ooh, kinda hot.
Ahh... Sexy.
EWW, EWW, EEEW, GROSS, GROSS...
Oh... Okay. Ya got me. Haha
