All Comments on 'Saturday Night Showcase Ch. 02: Starting the Job'

Very sexy. I wanted it to move a bit slower with more details but still very HOT. I want more.

Thank you everyone for reading, rating and sending feedback on my story!!!

Not what i expected. Very rushed didn't feel anything for any of the characters. Just a very basic slut fest. Which is fine because nearly every story on here is becoming one.

I hope you keep writing. Seems like at least 2 or 3 more chapters can be produced from this story line.

I have an outline of something similar, just haven't written it yet. I realize the vast majority of sex workers are doing it because of a lack of options. I like the idea of those who do it because they really want to. Housewife who does it for the thrill and not the money. Feel free to read some of my stuff, start with "Gobbles". -- claud137