Savage af Ch. 01

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Controlling my breathing, I stepped back. I was still a little winded from the basketball game. This really wasn't affecting me, but at the same time, I didn't want to waste energy. I should have pressed on, but as I mentioned, I wanted to teach a lesson here. If I'd beaten him before he had a chance, he'd think I'd gotten lucky and maybe come back again to settle up. I wanted him to realize, this wasn't luck, he was outclassed. Of course, my plan required a modicum of intelligence on his part, which so far had been utterly lacking. Still, one could hope.

Panting, he spit blood and looked away as I stepped closer.

Pro tip: If somebody looks away from you in a fight, it's because they're about to rush. This is the sure sign of a rookie, they like to do it at the start of fights. They look to a friend and say something and when they think you're distracted they lunge forward with a hook or jab. Only amateurs and bullies do this kind of shit. Which is probably half the population. There is a very simple counter to this tactic.

Sure enough, as he got to his feet he lunged. I stepped inside his hook and brought my head down.

Ever run into a door jamb? Do you know why it's so devastating? It's because when you're hit your body makes all sorts of subtle muscular adjustments. When you hit a door jamb, or get hit unexpectedly, none of these changes happen. It can rock your world, and that's just from a little accidental force. When you step into a blow that is unexpected, you compound the force. His face met my moving skull with a crack that sounded like a firecracker and his nose exploded with blood.

This time when he went down, he didn't move. I stood over him and he looked at me through the bloodied mess of his face.

"She wants to hang with losers, fine, that's her problem. You ever touch her again like that, I'll put you in the hospital."

I left him and walked over to pick up my shirt and wipe the sweat of my body. Then I used the shirt to wipe the blood off my face and other areas it'd splattered.

Julio lay on the ground moaning while Kiera never lost her amazed expression.

"I sure hope he doesn't get any blood in your car," was all I said before I walked away.

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To be continued...

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26thNC26thNCabout 1 month ago

Again. This was a good one. MC is interesting character.

maddictmaddictabout 1 month ago

That was a big bang, you fit right in.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

A good story, so far. Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks, storm. Semper Fi, Marine.

francemanfrancemanover 1 year ago

So that was fantastic! Really?

The guy is:

tall, handsome, genius, rich, super lover, brawler, ......

I'm sure we can make it even more perfect.

What is the point of having such a character in a story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A very good start on what I hope will turn out to be a great story. Can’t wait to get to chapter two. Semper Fi.

RatuJoneRatuJoneover 4 years ago
Hot af

Delightful, hot af and above all well written in proper English. More please!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

So damn good! Always love your stories... you really seem to understand the female psyche, or at least mine.... it’s such a shame she never wanted to have the blindfold removed though. To me, the face is one of the most erotic parts- it betrays everything and makes it personal. Keep writing, you’re so gifted! F the rest who think other stories deserve higher scores on the exhibitionist/voyeur category. Yours are consistently the best.

MormonJackMormonJackabout 5 years ago
Looking forward to Ch. 2!!

Hoping to see it soon.

kmreaderkmreaderabout 5 years ago
You sir, like the tiltle, are savage ag

Why pull your readers in and then tease them? Is this simply a click bait measure to “keep them coming back” much like a crack dealer? What makes you think these readers will continue to come back time and time again just to check for updates if they can’t get their hands on the “dope” so to speak. If you have the continuation available now, what then is your incentive to keep it from your fans? A simple “to be continued” would suffice. Not, “I have it and I’m intentionally withholding it from you unless you beg mercilessly” mentality. What’s the purpose?

That being said, 5 stars from me for this piece as is. Would love to read the next segment. Don’t be an ass, if it’s ready then please make it available to read. I’ve really enjoyed this as well as “The Sex Survey” from you. Can’t wait to see more. Hopefully sooner than later.

OSUpokesOSUpokesabout 5 years ago
chapter 2

I liked the story and have been waiting for the next chapter. But why not post it if it's ready. Instead you post a new story.

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