by georgia1857
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Astonishing. I only hope you are getting the feedback you deserve through emails. I imagine this story is earning you a legion of fans.
I love the way you set out, develop, and then build on the various themes. The story would stand out as a successful piece of work without the sex. With it, its so hot it's sizzling.
Was growing fond of the Amanda character -- until she started fucking pigs. Would have hoped she was cunning enough to get what she wanted from Strand through her feminine wiles, rather than actually fucking the pig. Thought she was smarter. Very disappointing.