All Comments on 'Savannah's Hypnotic Socks Pt. 20'

by Fibaro

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love it

This was so good! Can we get the part soon!! I really want to see what happens

domundsub23domundsub23over 4 years ago

Interesting that you combined your stories a little :) And I cant wait till Roxy has to please old and mean Suzan and what procedure she has to endure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
You are a clumsy writer. NOT A BAD ONE.

Face it, though. "Hypnotic Socks" is a hard enough concept for a reader, let alone your poor grammar.

FibaroFibaroover 4 years agoAuthor
A clumsy writer

Hello,

What else can I say than you're right? I never claimed to be anything but a clumsy writer. English isn't my first language and I know that it shows. My spelling and grammer aren't top notch for sure, but that was never my goal. What matters to me is that there are plenty of people who like my stories and like reading them.

In the meantime I just continue working on trying to improve through writing. It is a slow progress for sure, but then again perfect spelling and grammer never were my main goals. I just aim to put out an enjoyable read that's all.

Have a nice day,

Fibaro

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
An enjoyable story

Who cares what the haters have to say. This has been a very enjoyable story with clear, distinct characters and intriguing plot elements. I’m enjoying the ride.

I am both repulsed and turned on by Savannah. Maybe her socks worked on me too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
The Best

For me this is one of the best interracial lesbian stories on this site putting it on a par with couture phoenix arrow and silk stockings lover ,i don't think I noticed any errors who would with a story this good, love the way you keep the series fresh with new characters and am looking forward to reading about leilas dominance over her white boss, mind control lesbian stories I really enjoy many thanks for sharing it. Fiona

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Hello everyone, I'm Fibaro, a hobbyist smut writer. When you read my stories, you will see that the recurring theme is humiliation. I have a wide variety of kinks I love and like to write about, but in the end they all circle back to the theme of humiliation. Three of my oth...