by Fibaro
This was so good! Can we get the part soon!! I really want to see what happens
Interesting that you combined your stories a little :) And I cant wait till Roxy has to please old and mean Suzan and what procedure she has to endure.
Face it, though. "Hypnotic Socks" is a hard enough concept for a reader, let alone your poor grammar.
Hello,
What else can I say than you're right? I never claimed to be anything but a clumsy writer. English isn't my first language and I know that it shows. My spelling and grammer aren't top notch for sure, but that was never my goal. What matters to me is that there are plenty of people who like my stories and like reading them.
In the meantime I just continue working on trying to improve through writing. It is a slow progress for sure, but then again perfect spelling and grammer never were my main goals. I just aim to put out an enjoyable read that's all.
Have a nice day,
Fibaro
Who cares what the haters have to say. This has been a very enjoyable story with clear, distinct characters and intriguing plot elements. I’m enjoying the ride.
I am both repulsed and turned on by Savannah. Maybe her socks worked on me too.
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