Saved by Isolation Pt. 02

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Audrey makes dinner plans with her son. Looking for feedback.
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Part 2 of the 2 part series

Updated 06/10/2023
Created 10/21/2020
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It was almost ready. Audrey had spent most of the afternoon working on dinner. Meatloaf, Mashed Potatoes and gravy. Jacob hated eating vegetables so she quit cooking them. Not that she cooked much anyway, they mostly ate takeout and prepackaged stuff. It was nice to cook for him though.

"Jake-y! Dinner's ready!" she called once she had everything on the table. She used her Mom voice like she would have seven or eight years ago calling him and his friends down on a Friday night She tried not to think about what they had been doing, but every time she thought about it she got wet.

She waited 10 minutes and finished a glass of wine, before going to check on him. She opened the door, and there he was. Sitting on his twin bed, controller in hand. "Sorry Mom. I filled up on chips and stuff." He was shirtless and in his boxers. He had filled out in college. He was a skinny kid, and despite filling out a bit in the chest and butt, he was still thin. Audrey wished she could eat chips and soda and look like that.

His blond hair was getting long and shaggy. It was in a trendy cut when he graduated. She had been so proud. As she thought of him in his suit and tie, looking every bit of a man, her nipples began to harden.

"So you aren't going to eat the dinner I made?" she asked. She wasn't devastated, but it didn't quite feel like it did when he was younger. She wasn't going to scold him.

Jacob shrugged, "Sorry, I didn't know you were making anything." He paused his game and leaned back in his bed. "Want to sit down?" he asked. She could see the head of his cock poking through his boxers, he didn't try to hide it if he noticed.

Audrey had finally gotten clothes done that afternoon. She was wearing her new shirt she ordered online. It had a V-neck and shimmered just a bit. She got it to wear under a cardigan if she ever got a job interview. It was a pinkish color that varied slightly as the light hit it. It was just long enough to cover her ample ass in her black yoga pants. She was wearing her bra with the padding. She didn't really need it, but the pads gave her some "oomph" up into the V of her shirt. Her black crimped hair fell midway down her collar. She only had a few small streaks of gray. Her tits still got her plenty of looks when she was trying. Jacob was no different than the bagger at the store when it came to looking at them.

She sat on the bed right at his feet. As she was sitting, he leaned forward and grabbed her breast. She'll definitely need to wash his sheets tonight. She almost fell as she hit the bed.

She leaned back as his hands eagerly dug into her V-neck and started rubbing his finger over her nipple, still stiff under her bra. She put her hands behind her and leaned back. He managed both of her tits out finally. She took his hand and put it over her shirt. The material felt amazing on her nipples.

It didn't take him long to pull her shirt back up though. He leaned in and put his mouth over one of her nipples and ran his tongue back and forth. She felt every muscle in her body tighten, her panties and yoga pants were soaked through from her wet pussy.

She felt electricity pulse through her body when he began to suck on it. After a moment, she relaxed and immediately moved away on the bed. Jacob wiped his mouth and looked at her. "What's wrong?"

She stammered, "N...Nothing baby." His cock poked through his boxers as he sat up on his knees. She frowned and looked at the door. When she looked back, he was straddling over her. His cock leveled at her breasts.

She started pulling her shirt down as he stroked his cock half-heartedly. As she did, he pressed his pelvis forward and touched his cock to her lips, leaving some of his thin, sticky precum on them as a bit of her lipstick remained on his cock. She reached up and grabbed his cock.

Audrey started to stroke her son's short, fat, cock. He reached into the neck of her shirt and started fondling her breast again. Her nipples were no longer hard and her wet underwear started to feel a bit awkward.

"Let me, if you don't want to." He took his other hand and grabbed his cock. Stroking hard and fast. He pressed cock against her lips again as he squeezed hard. A slow, thick drip of cum oozed out. She turned her head again and it smeared from her lips to her cheeks to her jaw.

Jacob took his hand in her shirt and wiped his cock off before he unstraddled her and sat back down. "Did you change your mind or something?" he asked.

She looked over at him, still quivering a bit from her intense orgasm earlier.

"Uhh...no baby. It just takes a second to recover when a girl cums is all."

"Oh." he said. He grabbed his controller and unpaused his game.

She pulled her shirt up and wiped the rest of his cum off. This shirt would have to go in the laundry. She hoped his come would come off. She collected some of his soda cans before she left.

She didn't bother to put dinner in the fridge. It went straight to trashcan. She poured another glass of wine and sat at the recently cleared table. She pulled her shirt off and re-adjusted her bra. She wiped some of the cum from her shirt with her finger, and rubbed it between her thumb and index finger before licking it off.


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mikeswivesmikeswivesover 2 years ago

Clearly there are some earlier comments that were intended to help as well as a few idiots. Take those comments seriously, but know they are comments and not robust analysis. You do show some energy and engagement with your writing, so keep at it.

Now; I'm adding another comment.

-- There is a big difference from writing a sex scene and telling an erotic story. The sex involves body parts but the eroticism involves the brain. Much of the text here is as though someone watched this happen and transcribed the observation while having no idea what was going on inside the characters to motivate the dynamic. Well written stories have an ulterior motive behind each sentnece/paragraph and the reader is constantly trying to figure out the deeper meaining and motivation.

For instance, this story ends with "She didn't bother to put dinner in the fridge. It went straight to trashcan. .... re-adjusted her bra ..." So, why the hell did she do that? We (readers) are supposed to realize that she is in a pensive mood? If so, What is the issue? She wants more abuse or is starting to see the light? Use the author's insight to give the reader some insight into the chacters' minds and feelings. Then, we can see the tension or suspence building. We can wonder what might happen next. We can hope that some charcter has a good outcome and another a bad one. We can be engagded.

If you have "some deeper stuff I want to explore" then get a little deeper in the character development so the reader sees motivations, fears, etc.

Also, better editing. The grammar, punctuation, spelling and language structure are actually very high. Stll, mistakes creep in, like using come and cum and not spelling those consistently. (She wiped his cum off and then "She hoped his come would come off. ") Easy for an editir to spot such things. Harder for editors to give advice on character development and backstory etc., but they can. Likewise on the pace of development of events. Just my reaction, but the first story was bumpy and I would not start of with the big question being "to spit or swallow.".

-- Do continue. It seems you have something to say and the tools to say it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Started OK, then disaster

OK, the first few paragraphs started OK, good description, building the scene and the plot. Then suddenly wham bam sex, no explanation, no buildup, no seduction. Take a bit more time, make the story more interesting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Needs help

The story is a crappy story !

ud1234ud1234over 3 years ago
It is my opinion that you should expand the story.

You have a good basic premise and out line. You write the sex well enough, just need to take some time and write it through. I think you have potential and need some ideas. Try writing about your first sexual experience and make the person you were with a relative to keep it in this section. That will be the only way readers can find it easily and compare to your previous works. Thanks anyway. I enjoyed it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Trash Can

So he want to turn him mom into a trash can.......

His mom need to become somebody else pet that treats her like a "good sweet cum hungry slave...." they then make this fuck stick of a Boy their bitch are turn him into the town Bike that everybody rides!

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