All Comments on 'Saving Caitlin Ch. 04'

Great story!!

It's more intriguing than the mindless cruelty in some BDSM tales.

Beautiful finish, well done. I had a problem with Jon and Ginny doing it, but that is me. I agree with the comments about the gentle dom storyline and find it more erotic than the cruelty. I hope to see more from you! As usual 10 **********

I agree with the others who liked the gentle dom approach. I wish there were more BDSM stories out there like this, but they're few and far between.

One of the best stories i have read . Strong but very gentle , loved the love that came through even during the punishments. thanks

Sorry to see the end of the story. Had kinda hoped the next story would be about Ginny and Mark :-), but I can live with knowing they had a HEA too. Can't wait for your next story, so glad to see stories about the gentle side of the lifestyle, keep writing my dear.

Great series... I recommend it to ALL!!

Thanks to the author...This was really good

Words cant describe the emotion this story made me feel. Usually I read the submissions for my own sexual pleasure but this one was different. I have never really been into the BDSM category but this was so heartfelt and amazing that I'm so glad I came across it. Not only will I always remember this story but it has also given me new appreciation for the BDSM lifestyle. Thank you =]

I liked this story alot. I didn't like the beginning of this chapter much though. Jon broke the contract with Caitie by having that initial threesome and order her to do things with Ginny. It was a major violation of trust. Even though he acknowledged it after the fact didn't make it right. It also made Caitie seem more like a door mat for accepting it without any fuss.

Awesome story. Couldn't stop reading it!

that was one of the BEST stories i have ever read. i absolutely love it!!!

this story is amazing!

Because like a true dom, HIS needs were the only important thing.

To those of you who live this type of lifestyle even though you have children: Do they know about it or do you hide it? Do you ever worry that you are giving them--especially your daughters--a troubling example of what a healthy relationship should be? I'm not judging as I think you should be able to live the life you want. But would you want your daughter to be someone's 24/7 slave?

Literotica isn't letting me vote on any of this story but, id like to let you know that I loved it and would have given it 5 stars all the way

The entire story was beautifully and tastefully written - thank you

I love how he is so gentle with her. That was a great story, you are a very talented author.

MaddieK:

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It has been over a year since I first read your stories. I have thoroughly enjoyed celebrating that time by reading this wonderful series again. :)

You were the first author that I established a dialogue with, and I am pleased that our friendship has developed and grown.

Not to put pressure, but I look forward to FA!

Hugs my dear friend and thank you!

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M1

BDSM romance. an unusual combination. Extremely well written, an excellent flow of the story line. Five stars.

5 stars!

really really hated that he did Ginny in front of her :-(

Not even an exaggeration. The story was touching and moving and of course turned me on. :P I think I teared up now and then. I really, really loved it. I didn't want it to end! <3

Congratulations on this well written and structured story. so full emotion and empaty. Loved it

As I said before: predictable, well written, and enjoyable. However, nowhere to vote.

I agree with all the last comments to this story. Predictable, yes, but still a fabulous story and one of the best erotica stories I ever read. Thank you! This is the first of your stories I ever read, but I will read all our literotica stories now for sure.

he pulled the not really sharing crap. If he was gonna share her any way why make it a hard limit? Because sharing is exactly what is was no matter how much he tried to sugar coat it. He doesn't deserve her or her trust as he showed his true colors. Run Caitlin before he seriously hurts her either physically or emotionally.

Except for the part in the cabin where he had sex with Ginny. I thought it was incredibly insensitive especially having her watch and then he kept bringing up no sharing. I know it was for her benefit because she was scared he might, but it's such double standards. She seemed to feel bad about it, but you didn't really explore that. I feel that it was kind of unstated that they would be faithful, including him and he did nothing to deny that he wouldn't be faithful. For him to do that, really pissed me off. Plus at that time Ginny ran to him, he carried her in, then fucked her. It was demeaning to Caitlin.

it's a tender, loving portrayal of a D/sub relationship. Not one so focused on the obey, punishment part. The wishes and wants of the sub are considered because the sub is more than a possession to the Dom. Hope to read more stories by this author. Thank you for a wonderfully sweet story.

I wish Lit would let us vote! All four chapters would get 5 stars.

beautiful sequencing and transition. Great expression of emotions. Not much "B" and certainly not much "SM" More like "deferred romance" Greatly enjoyed the story.

Huge violation of trust and he just says, "oops, my bad", shrugging it off? But I guess a lot of guys don't count girl action as sharing, just entertainment for their pleasure. Seems almost an unwritten law it be included in all erotica for men, aside from the Gay Male category. Disappointing.

the threesome lost my interest for the story. total bs about not wanting to share , obviously a story intended for men. stopped reading after that.

Loved this story ❤ You're an awesome writer, please don't stop (:

Love this story wish there were more like it on here!

Very nice and adorable story... just loved it. Was looking for romance in a BDSM setting and this is just perfect, when we delete the incident with Ginny. Hope you'd write more of these amazing stories.

Great story, shame we were unable to rate it, as I would of given it 5 stars! Caitlin is the sort of person I would love to find in real life. I will look forward to reading more of Maddie Kim's work.

the best story I have read in years, just shows what true D/S is about and the rewards gained.

Unfortunately, for some strange reason, the option to vote has been absent for most of this story... however, I give most of the story 4-5 stars, and this chapter 5 stars for the wonderful ending! I am such a romantic LOL :) .

Excellent story I love the characters and flow

4.5 stars. Probably even 4.7. As a previous commenter, the main thing and probably the only thing I didn't like was the Ginny thing. He violated his promise at the very least, and hurt her by taking another woman without even discussing with her (and this comes from someone who's Poly). But overall, it was an amazing D/s story, with likeable characters, believable dynamics and decent plot. Thank you.