All Comments on 'Saving Grace'

First piece of yours read; I will check out other stories. I agree — you pulled off writing in first person quite well and make all three characters believable, especially Grace and Felicity. And you definitely pulled off the highly erotic sex fight. Rather than ending with Val pushed out in shame, how about a bit of begrudged respect, which would allow for interesting follow ups. OK, you painted her a bitch, but she held her own in the sex fight (both sex and fight). In any case, would enjoy more tales about the two protagonists (and maybe Val?). 5 stars.

Now I have to look up fuck-fighting. This was an incredible story, 5stars.

Fighting fuckery , very intriguing. Wonderful start to first person writing, loved the characters.

Well done , looking forward to more.

Thanks for sharing

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