by Telleophone
Wonderful story. He did almost save her life. Should get married and give her children. Wonderful read...
Excellent mature story. But I'm thinking their both moving to fast. Having known each other for just a few days seems way to short for declaring eternal Love. Just wait until his kids meet her. Maybe she'll fall head over heels with his son. Looking forward to more.
You're telling a very nice story, it does seem to be moving fast but so good.