All Comments on 'Saving Kat's Life Pt. 05'

by Telleophone

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ZeuginvZeuginvalmost 4 years ago
Thank you

Please keep the story going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
KEEP GOING

Wonderful story. He did almost save her life. Should get married and give her children. Wonderful read...

Crusader235Crusader235almost 4 years ago
Excellent

Excellent mature story. But I'm thinking their both moving to fast. Having known each other for just a few days seems way to short for declaring eternal Love. Just wait until his kids meet her. Maybe she'll fall head over heels with his son. Looking forward to more.

linnearlinnearalmost 4 years ago
Still Enjoying This

You're telling a very nice story, it does seem to be moving fast but so good.

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New to writing. Lots of ideas but no time to really write as much as I would like.

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