All Comments on 'Saving Kat's Life Pt. 06'

by Telleophone

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jetpacksamjetpacksamover 3 years ago
NOOOOOOO

UNFAIR! UNFAIR! UNFAIR!

Part 7 Please!

Wizard1983Wizard1983over 3 years ago
There better be a part 7

Great story but you need to finish it

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Complications?

Okay, I'm not a romantic, but I'd like to see him end up with Officer Simmons...

Kat...as shown by her juvenile attention-seeking goth getup and piercings is still a mixed-up kid. She still confused gratitude with love and sex.

Allan deserves to be with an adult.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
You are some mean!

So happy to see the next chapter but to end it like this is cruel punishment..

I hope the next chapter is out soon. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Great series! I'm looking forward to reading more. Blessings to you and your family.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 3 years ago

Great addition to the story.

far_wanderer1984far_wanderer1984over 3 years ago

Really great series so far, not keen on the cliffhanger ending but otherwise good job. Hurry up with more please.

TelleophoneTelleophoneover 3 years agoAuthor

It’s not done everyone. I’ve just had no time to write much. I’ll get back shortly with part 7.

All apologies.

Wolf_Man_1962Wolf_Man_1962over 3 years ago
Great chapter!

First Happy Thanksgiving. Second enjoyed this chapter and looking forward to chapter 7. For a first attempt this has been great, as good as some more seasoned writers here on Lit. 5*

NoMoreMisterNiceSpyNoMoreMisterNiceSpyover 3 years ago
Great stuff!

I have to tell you that I've read this story three times and now there's a part 6--and a great part 6 at that! I can't wait until part 7 comes out. Keep up the great work, Telleophone.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

More Please - Great Story!!!

TelleophoneTelleophoneover 3 years agoAuthor

Sorry all! Been Uber busy with life and work. Hopefully I will get chapter 7 out this weekend. It may be the final chapter. But then again, who knows??

Thanks for being patient everyone!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I just found and read the series. I hope you will continue it. I rate it 5 stars, and while it reads a little like a romance novel, in fact it is. I for one would like to see Allan hook up with both the the women. It would be fun for them to live a life of him having a Harem.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Telleophone - are you alive and well??

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Binge read this fine series last night and this morning. This is one of the 2 or 3 best May-December stories that I’ve seen. I’m willing to understand that life happens, but please finish chapter 7 soon. You’ve left a lot of people hanging.

MrGates801MrGates801over 2 years ago

I hope you are doing well Tellophone. We are excited for chapter 7

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sorry I just saw the last installment. Been a crazy year. Are you going to do any more work on this story? I’d love to see how it ends.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

FINISH THE STORY!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Ok Allan died, story is over apparently.

Glad I read 6 stories for a rehash of the Sopranos ending. Thanks

LearnedMinx818LearnedMinx818almost 2 years ago

Please Finish this story.

toddjlertoddjlerover 1 year ago

Wow just finished part 6, I’m hoping you are going to start up again and add a part 7 or possibly more. Love it !

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Bro....the cliffhanger! Argh! I need 7 man I need it

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I hate that its so long now waiting! Lets see 7! Please.

Bystander125Bystander125over 1 year ago

I really hope that you choose to finish this gripping piece.

RasputinRoeRasputinRoe7 months ago

Oh no… I got really into this series and there hasn’t been an update in years… sigh. Hoping the author is alright. I pretty much started this series today and had to read it all.

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