by Telleophone
Okay, I'm not a romantic, but I'd like to see him end up with Officer Simmons...
Kat...as shown by her juvenile attention-seeking goth getup and piercings is still a mixed-up kid. She still confused gratitude with love and sex.
Allan deserves to be with an adult.
So happy to see the next chapter but to end it like this is cruel punishment..
I hope the next chapter is out soon. Keep up the great work.
Great series! I'm looking forward to reading more. Blessings to you and your family.
Really great series so far, not keen on the cliffhanger ending but otherwise good job. Hurry up with more please.
It’s not done everyone. I’ve just had no time to write much. I’ll get back shortly with part 7.
All apologies.
First Happy Thanksgiving. Second enjoyed this chapter and looking forward to chapter 7. For a first attempt this has been great, as good as some more seasoned writers here on Lit. 5*
I have to tell you that I've read this story three times and now there's a part 6--and a great part 6 at that! I can't wait until part 7 comes out. Keep up the great work, Telleophone.
Sorry all! Been Uber busy with life and work. Hopefully I will get chapter 7 out this weekend. It may be the final chapter. But then again, who knows??
Thanks for being patient everyone!!
I just found and read the series. I hope you will continue it. I rate it 5 stars, and while it reads a little like a romance novel, in fact it is. I for one would like to see Allan hook up with both the the women. It would be fun for them to live a life of him having a Harem.
Binge read this fine series last night and this morning. This is one of the 2 or 3 best May-December stories that I’ve seen. I’m willing to understand that life happens, but please finish chapter 7 soon. You’ve left a lot of people hanging.
Sorry I just saw the last installment. Been a crazy year. Are you going to do any more work on this story? I’d love to see how it ends.
Ok Allan died, story is over apparently.
Glad I read 6 stories for a rehash of the Sopranos ending. Thanks
Wow just finished part 6, I’m hoping you are going to start up again and add a part 7 or possibly more. Love it !
Oh no… I got really into this series and there hasn’t been an update in years… sigh. Hoping the author is alright. I pretty much started this series today and had to read it all.