All Comments on 'Saving My Son's Relationship'

Go ahead and introduce character names at the beginning and use them throughout the rest of the story. It was harder to follow than it should have been as Sara was referred to as son's girlfriend, fiance, the dad's future daughter-in-law, sometimes more than once, before getting around to giving her a name in the eighth paragraph. And then in the 9th paragraph she's back to being the daughter-in-law.

***Thanks for sharing.