All Comments on 'Saving Water'

I'm not sure you managed to mention their names enough!!

(And, because you'll be American - and therefore have zero ability to detect sarcasm - I'd best inform you that you used their names FAR too many times)

But valid. Since there are only two people, he/she pronouns are adequate here & a little less distracting. However, that's such a minor detail compared to the skillful depiction of love after physical trauma. Extraordinarily well done without being overdone or maudlin. Given how frequently things change in people's lives, one would think writers would include it more. Thank you from those of us who are not temporarily able bodied.