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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good storyline I think. Real choppy though. Combining two or three chapters together would help hold it together.

WargamerWargamerover 1 year ago

Building nicely

5/5

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBB12 months ago

Chapter four and still incomprehensible

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You may read my multi-part submissions with confidence as all my stories are complete before the first part is published. I typically publish near the first of the month. There may be occasional exceptions, but generally if there is no new story by the seventh, there won't b...

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