All Comments on 'Savior Ch. 28'

by SanityCheck

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
Baldy74Baldy74almost 3 years ago

Why didn't he tie Carl up and go and see if he was telling the truth? Now in the real world Carl would just go and take his anger out on hanna.

bigbob2406bigbob2406almost 3 years ago

I wish you would issue more than a few paragraphs at a time. It is a good story being spoilt by the short episodes. In fact it is ruining the whole effect.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Looks like this will get dragged till the end of 2021. Probably come back and read this when you have finished then

SanityCheckSanityCheckalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Tie Carl up with what? I doubt Rand would be carrying rope around on his Harley. I suppose he could go buy some rope, but if Carl came around before he got back... even if he took Carl's keys, Carl could still walk away. Finally, what would he do with the guy even if he did tie him up? It isn't like he can carry Carl with him, and if Carl was lying, he'd have to come back for him. I suppose he could leave him tied up where he fell, but if he were discovered, and Rand returned, that could be very bad for our hero.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userSanityCheck@SanityCheck
You may read my multi-part submissions with confidence as all my stories are complete before the first part is published. I typically publish near the first of the month. There may be occasional exceptions, but generally if there is no new story by the seventh, there won't b...

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

Savior Ch. 27 Previous Part
Savior Series Info