All Comments on 'Savita, My Dream Maid'

I thought this was an interesting story I assume you are Indian and obviously writing in your second language. I think it was a good attempt for that. You might want to consider that English speaking people may not know the names of clothes in your culture so a short description may help as part of your story. Also the duties of the maid Savity might be explained. Good luck.

It's nice I hope I can watch like this

Nice, sounds like it really happened to you as a young man?

An excellent modern day erotic version of a classic. Wuthering Heights. Please do the next chapter quickly and bring in the maid’s daughter

I'm enjoying these stories very much.

My only “criticism”, as such, is that you seem to switch the names of Sunita and Savita in several places. You might want to edit this.