All Comments on 'Say It Ch. 02'

You're a fucking tease

but there's no lead in to how they know each other...she just walks into the coffee shop, introduces herself & then this awesome story begins.

Would be even better with more description...

Look forward to the next chapter. :)

You are killing me !!! Please write more soon.

OMG! Please keep writing!

That this is a good ending in itself

Please finish this! Oh, this was so good, one of my favourites so far.

And yeah, I could go for this, too.

i wish this would happen to me...hmmm

Very good set up. I like the way she transforms herself as her encounter goes on. Very deserving of a 3rd chapter.

I write under the name of WestTexas34 if you ever care to read my submissions.

Wow...just...that was excellent. Please continue.