All Comments on 'Scandalous Schoolgirl Ch. 01'

A good sexy story, from a plot point of view yes he was taking a big risk with her. There are better ways to test boundaries.

From a literary perspective the vast majority of this was very well written, the 3rd paragraph from the end was a little clumsy. Using the word “cums” made it seem awkward, I’ve always thought it’s more of a juvenile term not something that you’d expect from fully grown adults. After all you didn’t shy away from saying she had orgasm after orgasm. So saying something along the lines of …..“watching her body convulse and writhe was spectacularly erotic.“

Thanks for sharing,

Tess (uk)