by SpaceGlitter89
Really fantastic, thanks. I hope they have a happily ever after.
Really enjoyed your first story - you clearly have talent, would love to read something longer with more build up.
Okay so very obviously this is amateur work but it's so cute I'll let it slide that i had to read all that weird borderline misogynistic description of scarlet on women's day. But then again, this is literally a site for erotica wht else could i expect. Overall this made me feel like i was in middle school again, reading cute cliche wattpad stories and ily for that!
First off, this story was super hot. Ruben and Scarlet are both sexy as hell! My only complaints would be about some little grammar issues with phrasing and missing commas. Otherwise, this is a really great story that got me dripping wet ;).