All Comments on 'Scarred'

Needs an editor, lots of grammar issues. However the star is the story. Which was fantastic. Thank you for your time and effort.

Editor would have made this a great story. Without it, I nearly gave it up several times. Can't give it any more than 3 stars with the issues.

It reads as if the writer's native language is something other than English, I'm guessing Greece, based on the settings in this story. If this is true, then the grammar is excellent for someone who did not grow up in an English-speaking country. I couldn't do half as well writing in any of the other languages I speak. Kudos to the writer for their brave efforts.

Very good premise. Definitely in need of an editor, though. Grammatical and story flow issues made it a difficult read

Good plot and well developed.

Cyprus as the scene of events

was both fun and interesting.

Good job writer!

Top ratings from me.

Just a bit of nitpicking, paralysis due to a stroke is usually onesided, right or left side of the body.

Hard to rate due to the grammar. Nice story, but hard to read.

Some people have to understand that not everything is in English. So what if, from a English point it's a little off. The story line is great. It flowed well with the content of the story. It is a job well done. I gave it five stars. Congrats.

Having read all his stories, I have to commend Micheal for conveying an earthy , grittiness to his readers.. It is not often that one feels the heat and smells the vineyards as in this last tale; well done.

A truly good story. I enjoyed it a lot. AAAAAA+++++