All Comments on 'School for Wayward Girls'

little slow on the sex needed more girl on girl.maybe even,little mom and daughter action would be good.

Not great, but certainly a good start. This theme has a great deal of potential.

it needed work i thinkit needs a second on whre becky get spanked numerous times

It was okay. Daughter should have been made to watch.

I really like the concept. My preferences were all in this one story - so, of course I loved the treat! Thanks. More than I expected after reading some of the others entries.

One critique... looks like you used a spell checker. That's great. Unfortunately, it doesn't catch any of the grammatical faux pas, like double words, using there for their, etc. Might try one of the proofers - I've heard they are good.

I look forward to more from you in the future.

This is one hell of a hot story and desperately needs a sequel.

have to agree definetly needs a sequel carry on the good work realy got me going

please please please make a sequel. This story got me soo hot!

Good one