by ButteredMarmalade
this is my first one guys I just did it because I was bored. Thanks for the comments, I'll take those into account next time.
P.s as far as Ellie's body goes, it was kind of hard to describe. This person does exist in real life but with a different name and what I wrote is what I consider to be what she actually looks like
Despite the previous comments I liked it. Its all about what we feel we would like.
No continuity! One second almost cumming in his pants from a brush past, next a super stud? Huge fat arse? Yet athletic too?
Dirty but substandered.
Not a great effort
a virgin with an eight inch cock - twenty minutes of intercourse (anal at that) the first time - et cetera
Should have been marked "anal" or "sci-fi" - the latter because everything in it was beyond the realm of possibility
Like nearly 90 odd percent of the current stories this one is in the wrong section. It should be in anal so those who don't want to read such garbage aren't mislead then subjected to it. What has happened seems the authors don't find any story is good unless it contains anal sex, they need to get out of the gutter.