by Fantasychick
That was a really amazing first chapter! Can't wait for Chapter 2. Love the writing!
I am actually very curious to see what happens next. I wish you didnt make this chapter this short. Well hopefully you post the next chapter asap. Goodluck.
I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see where this is all going. Great start. Hope to read more very soon!
this is interesting. it has been 4 months. where is the next chapter?? hmmmm
I really want to know what happens next. Please post the next chapter soon.
Interesting first chapter, though it could use some fleshing out. Worth coming back to if you continue with the series.
DAMIT!Just as i finish and hungry for more, i relize, THERE IS NO SEQULE. FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
I NEED MORE!!!!!!! Shaping up to be great, but it needs more! PLEASE! I'M BEGGING YOU!