by Azin
I haven't checked out your other stories yet, but this one was decently edited, well written, and the milieu well realized. Others may quibble, but I liked it.
Thanks for sharing. 5* Slainté
Thank you! I appreciate your words, and that you have taken the time to both read and comment on my story, and I hope you enjoy my other works as well! I have been slowly improving as I go, and I'm glad that I can draw as much interest as I have. : D
This is so well done! The fights were great and so was the sex scenes were also nicely made. Looking forward to more!
It's a looooong chapter, but it's almost finished! You have good timing, because it should only be three days away, at most! Life has been kicking my ass, but I now have the means to relax and work almost exclusively on writing!