All Comments on 'School of Hard Knocks Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Part 2???

That was pretty amazing and so evil of that bitch!!! I hope this continues. It's an awesome start!! xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good!

Very evil. I felt bad for Tina, but keep going! I'd love to read a part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Keep writing !!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Devious, Cruel, and fantastic!

Plus: Great story, solid telling, solid writing.

Neg: Not enough character development.

--- KEEP WRITING !!!!!!

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