by fakebutperfect
A HOT story, but told in an easy to relate-to fashion,and the characters behaved in a believable manner also.
When a girl's hymen breaks, it doesn't pop! It is a wet stretchy tissue that stretches beyond breaking point and tears. The pulling on the walls of the vagina causes some degree of pain/discomfort and sometimes bleeding when the tissue is torn from the walls of the vagina.
But - pop - Never!