All Comments on 'Schools and the Second Ch. 02'

I swear ur killing me every story keeps getting better n better. U leave us hanging. N now i will wake up early every morn lookkng for the next part till u post the next addition to this story. Thank u so much i love the Iron Crowbar. PLS keep them coming.

i hope the crowbar shoots those assholes

What a cliffhanger moment ... IC must drive faster, Melina drops from the ceiling, SOMETHING PLEASE ...

I can see we are about to witness a gunfight or a crowbar beatdown, preferably a beatdown.

First congrats again and again for your IC stories! As mentioned by many others loving and hating the cliffhangers. God, never feeling so impatient! ...:)

Now, seemed like in real life, people don't change behaviour/convictions/attitudes easily. Nor learn against their belief systems. But, it's time for so many bad crowd to get an undforgettable lesson. Like, the rogue BAU cell, like Bettina and other journalist, like Senator Russell. When will they be hold accountable for their crimes?

Rover mentioned Commander Troy twice when attempting to steal Evans. He is unlawfully detained and kidnapping Laura. This is directly targeting Commander Troy. Rover will cease to exist. Poof.

Bettina clued in Troy with the DFAC allusion. I'd guess he's heading to his home to protect the kids. Better yet, mobilize the TCPD.

Now the word is out that Bettina is under investigation for treason. KXTC will also go down. It's about damn time. ...but they'll never stop. It's part of the swamp.

Funny how all this favors our struggle nationally politically. Great job pointing out the incongruities!

Well done. Powerful stuff!

The next chapter of the story has been submitted. Because of the proximity to Christmas, I don't know what the timetable will be for its publication, so be patient.

Thanks for the comments, both here and in emails to me. Yes, this is a 'thought provoking' story, but please don't get too heated in the comments. Thanks.

I think that Rovers has just gone mad. Kidnapping Laura and a few others to cover his tracks as he is presumable behind the "indoctrination" of the shooter, presumable also responsible for the web-page is an act of gross stupidity and insanity.

He thinks he can get away with it because he is a FBI-agent, but even those can not do this in the way they have done it. I hope he will be on the receiving end of a blow with a red IC, while the others get "neutralized" by IC2 and Laura.

It looks like Rovers wants everyone out of the room so he can execute the perp and make some bullshit story about him attempting escape. That way their Manchurian candidate will tell no tales.

some "so called" "FBI BAU Agents" getting MUCH MORE than just a beat-down! Can they be thrown over the edge of the Grand Canyon? Hopefully at the 5300' deep part. And NO - a fall will not hurt you. It's that sudden stop at the bottom that will stunt your growth.

Looks like there will be 3 dead BAU officers as the Rovers Brothers get taken down by Crowbar and company.

Where's Melina? Surely she knows what's going on!

*****Good read. Thanks for sharing.