by HollyRed
I love this- it so turns me on. Wish I was Holly!! Part 2 please??!
Please do - I can hardly wait for the next chapter! Thank you - five stars.
I'm going to start my own girls training school for naughty young ladies.
Thank you for your comments! Anonymous- if you think it is terrible that is your opinion. If you leave some constructively criticism that would be a much more intelligent approach. If you are the vile person who private messaged me with how rubbish it was please do so again but have the balls to actually leave an email address to allow me to respond and not be an anonymous coward!
Love the story line might wamt to make them longer chapters though so a reader can really dive into the story. Ill be watching out for the next chapter
I agree with the other guy... I came halfway and needed to keep reading! More please!!!
What is a tea towel? :-/
for the person who asked its a small thin towel used to dry dishes after washing up.
In fact, a very good start indeed! Like it a lot...quirkily written, and fun to read! Thankyou for writing it....I don't agree about making the episodes longer...I have a male attention span...but keep them coming often! Thanks!