All Comments on 'Scottsdale Thunder Head'

VERY well executed, especially for a 1st timer. I didn't spot a single word gaff, and enjoyed the play by play. I Followed you...don't make we wait too long.

Just another cheating whore. She can meet him again in 6 months when she is divorced. Just wish the flash of light was from husband's camera.

Fun piece; enough background/details to make it interesting. Not debauchery but nicely salacious.

Just don't write anymore please. Go find another hobby. Just stop right here at 1 story. That's more than enough exposure to your style.

guys like Ethan can pick the cock sucker out of a crowd 9 times out of 10..it is a gift and some women act like it is so innocent

guys like ethan can scan a room of women and know which one is ready to suck his cock. He probably does it a half dozen times a year. The look in your eyes gave it away. They are not studs but single minded in pursuit of getting their cock sucked wherever and whenever

You took his number because women don’t like to suck a lot of cocks but once they get one they want it at their beck and call. Call Ethan and meet me here or there and you will get your balls emptied into my mouth. Who could refuse

Ahh, wifey has tasted the fruit of illicit sex… what next? All the description of her, no tits?

Cheatin' whore!

"Perhaps I can blame my wildly unusual behavior on the weather. "

Hardly, since there's no scientific evidence that weather transforms women into entitled cheating sluts. Is this a feeble attempt to replace the traditional "Martian Slut Ray"?

Sometimes a woman needs a little strange as well. LOL some of my friends will say she's a cheating slut. Who cares it is the writers' story.

To me it was a ⭐⭐⭐⭐ story.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

Cheaters are able to justify their behavior with anything, even the weather! That's why this is very bad!

Just a simple slut story. That's all she is... The story is literally just a waste of time.

Welcome aboard. Try not to be discouraged by the simpleton commentery from Mr. "Anonymous". It is typical of the LW scene, tons of creeps who think they are being eriodite by dissing your work. If we could track them since they don't dare show a real pen name I think we would find that almost all of them have not written a story themselves.

Instead, focus on the fact that you have 15 Followers already, more than the total of your comments. Your word execution was almost perfect, your clarity was exceptional and your story line was ok for a first effort, hardly very creative, but very palatable for it genuine feeling. There a ton of deslcable commentors on LW but that is where the big audience is...do keep 'em coming.

Ethan can read the room. When 22 i knew an older guy(30) who said in every room of women there is one who will suck your cock and he knew how to find her(he was good). Next time he could drop you off and allow lindsay to suck his cock but one way or other he will get his blowjob

So you’re saying, “when it rains, she whores?”

No tension=no story.

Dull.

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All the real cucks attack! They’re vile. Very sexy story and very well written. Five stars and a half swollen cock! That rarely happens reading! Much love!! Cheers 🥂

You might like mine. https://literotica.com/s/a-reluctant-nudist-a-wooden-cock