All Comments on 'Sculpture of a New Slave'

This really was horror. Maybe more fetish. Didn’t have any real sexual situations. A big let down considering how long it is.

@sicilian73 For many the horror itself is the fetish. I think this is clearly a prelude to further chapters and a set up for more fetish situations. But I can understand if exposition and set up chapters isn't everyone's favorite.

Personally I'm eager to see see what happens next.

Thanks for your comments. I actually agree it's mistagged - so I've asked for it to be updated to 'fetish'. The original draft had a MUCH darker tone and Literotica makes you choose a category before a draft can be saved, I just didn't change it on release. Although... being enslaved by a mysterious organisation? I'd say that's a horror outcome.

To answer your comments - sicilian73 thanks for reading to the end of the story and the feedback, This content was written specifically for the commissioners tastes and it's safe to say it came out very well in that regard. Sorry it didn't suit yours too, send me a PM if you'd like to discuss your own story.

For the anonymous commentators speculation... Shaz Rael and I may be discussing a follow up - if it does go ahead it's up to him if it goes public or not and we haven't agreed on any specifics yet. But you're right, this is written as a beginning to a larger story....