All Comments on 'Scultore di Sogni Dream Sculptor Ch. 01'

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Good start, I like your fantasy of being able to modify the dials.

Hello there, this story has a lot of potential, I would love to see where it goes. For me it hits a lot of the MC story elements I like. I don't know why but I love magic ring stories, dream manipulation and it's effects, and as a proud Italian-American any time I see Italian or anything related to Italy there's automatically two gold stars given ;o). Also I like that there's more discovery and build up. Don't get me wrong, I like a good straight to the point erotic MC story, but when an artist can create something that's more in-depth without being too slow burning...it's a sign of talent. I love to see setups and payoffs be they good or bad. This story is an interesting idea with a good introduction to some of the characters and what the ring might do for them. Thanks.

It's a very good start. I'd like it better if there were more of it. Keep writing!

An awesome story so far I wish I had a ring like that lol. You do need to do more of the story . I am also fascinated with what his wife could possibly be secretly doing. My ex partner used to be a nurse and some other stuff they used to get up to with the doctors would make a porn star blush lol.keep up the good work. And do not take too long to do another chapter please.