All Comments on 'Seabee's Homecoming Ch 02'

The love making/sex is about as steamy as I've read lately. Loved it. Maybe another installment in the series?

Great stuff. Great end and possibly great opportunity for maybe another chapter. But still great stuff thank you

A really good story and 5 stars worth, But beside some minor errors you made, like "public area" instead of "pubic area", you made one really big mistake already twice. An ex-alcoholic will never ever in his life touch one drop of alcohol, because he will be addicted immediately again. Even the special tase of alcohol, like when using a rum aroma in a cake, can trigger a relapse.

And even if I don't know the US laws about incest, i can't imagine that a former step mom can't marry her step-son after getting a widdow. The reason for these laws are normally the blood relation and that is definitely not given here.

I hope you will continue this story and we don't have to wait so long again.

i love the story . AAA+++

Definitely could use at least one more chapter

Especially now that the sister has returned.

third part sister in. she becomes pregnant. please,

Great romance, u needed to go no further, a happy ending

5/5

It's a great story, but I too wouldn't mind brother and sister getting closer...

Sorry the story line was good but could have been fleshed out more. Also the continuous graphic sex got in the way of the story, story first with sex to enhance it.

Loved every bit of it - great incestous sex, leading to marriage, pregnancy and a tit full of milk - mmmm. Should do a chapter 3 with the sister also getting knocker off - and all 3 with their babies living happily ever after