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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
WTF

Thought I was reading a story, not the outline for it. Drier then toast.

Little over sensitive it seems on the peace comment there papa windbag.

SouthPacificSouthPacificalmost 7 years ago
Romance? Sure, but it's not a story...

...just a prelude. I would love to see this develop - you have a very smooth and fluid style, which deserves more exposure than just this vignette.

PapaRomanticPapaRomanticalmost 7 years agoAuthor
To Anonymous Grammar Nazi

I wrote "piece" intentionally because I meant "piece."

Thank you for your opinion. I know what I was doing.

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticalmost 7 years ago
A sexy declaration of love

Descriptive, but sweet and romantic declaration of love for his wife.

5 * for you.

I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.

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