All Comments on 'Season of Joy'

Good story! I wish it was in two parts.

5

This is a fine story with just the right amount of sentiment and romance. Very well done, sir. It does need a bit of proof reading, however: words missed out occasionally and a number of typos. This doesn’t detract from a good story, but some re-proofing might be in order. 5*

Beautiful story, I thoroughly enjoyed this one. Some editing errors crept in, such as quotes with quotes should have single quotes, and there were a few stray quotation marks around, but still a good seasonal read.

I re-read the comments and was surprised there were still errors after running spell check in my word processor AND then putting it through an online editing software, a lengthy process! I read a few pages and found typos the were not there earlier and even a whole phrase missing I distinctly remember adding and saving! I suspect it is user error but it bears investigation. Thanks for your kind comments and ratings.

Quote a long story for a contest but a very enjoyable one.

Yes there were a few typos, speech mark error, etc which did upset the flow a little but you've commented already on the comments made.

Not that much drama as it all centred on the love blossoming between Gere and Joy. Overall, though a lovely story (and title) for this time of the year.

Well worth its rating.

completely enjoyed regardless of any tech or human errors thank you.

I honk this maybe your best effort. I read everything you write and this entry did not disappoint.

Excellent, many thanks

Long, but lovely! 5/5