by OldKingClancy
Wow, is that an amazing story. Thank you for writing it. I love incest romance and I think society's rules on relationships are dumb. A lot of people think it's because of the bible, but it's not the only place where incest is mentioned is between Lot and his two daughters, and that says incest is ok.
OKC~~~ Thank you for one of the best I have read on here and for once the Man and Woman made it through the hard times to the good times ahead of them.* Hope I am still around in the future to read more of your 'Stories'.!
I sure hope so but if I am not I just hope the "Man" has a Computer and a sense of humor. lol
"5's" all the way for the whole story.
TYVM ~~ JAG
The narrative shows that the author has a creative mind and good organizational skills for compiling the story with subplots. But... poor sentence construction makes it difficult, sometimes very difficult to understand the intent of the author. Sentences lack proper punctuation and frequently run together. Abrupt changes with Point Of View is confusing and requires re-reading to figure out what is happening. It does not appear that proof reading was done. That would have corrected many of these items.
I've read all 4 seasons and I still can't decide if I liked it or not.
To much self guilt and too much indecision, but nice leading characters nevertheless.
Overall, 4 stars.
Rapier